First chapter assessment

It’s no secret that first chapters can make or break a novel—so why leave it up to chance? Give your story the best possible start. Book a first chapter assessment and receive:

  • A diagnostic report highlighting your first chapter’s strengths and weaknesses, paired with actionable feedback designed to keep readers, agents, and acquisition editors turning the page.

  • Targeted sidebar comments to reinforce key insights.

  • A 45-minute follow-up chat to clarify feedback and answer your questions.

best for

Writers who are satisfied with their draft’s overall structure and story: If you’re happy with your draft on a narrative level, a first chapter assessment adds that final polish before you focus on sentence-level editing. Think of it like the cherry on top of the cake!

Writers seeking to sample a developmental edit or manuscript evaluation: If you’d like to experience my feedback first-hand before committing to a full developmental edit or manuscript evaluation, a first chapter assessment is right for you. Just bear in mind that my feedback on your chapter may change once I see it in the context of your entire manuscript (which is why this service is generally only recommended for structurally sound drafts).

*Please note that if you decide to move forward with a full developmental edit or manuscript evaluation, the fee for this service will be deducted from your total. Additionally, if you’d like to get a sense of my editing style without committing to a first chapter assessment, I’m happy to share an excerpt from a previous editorial letter (with the author’s permission, of course). For more information, check out the FAQ page.

price

$0.03 USD/£0.02 GBP per word

All prices are set with the EFA’s standard rates. Please review these here.

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