First chapter assessment
It’s no secret that first chapters can make or break a novel—so why leave it up to chance? Give your story the best possible start. Book a first chapter assessment and receive:
A diagnostic report highlighting your first chapter’s strengths and weaknesses, paired with actionable feedback designed to keep readers, agents, and acquisition editors turning the page.
Targeted sidebar comments to reinforce key insights.
A 45-minute follow-up chat to clarify feedback and answer your questions.
best for
Writers who are satisfied with their draft’s overall structure and story: If you’re happy with your draft on a narrative level, a first chapter assessment adds that final polish before you focus on sentence-level editing. Think of it like the cherry on top of the cake!
Writers seeking to sample a developmental edit or manuscript evaluation: If you’d like to experience my feedback first-hand before committing to a full developmental edit or manuscript evaluation, a first chapter assessment is right for you. Just bear in mind that my feedback on your chapter may change once I see it in the context of your entire manuscript (which is why this service is generally only recommended for structurally sound drafts).
*Please note that if you decide to move forward with a full developmental edit or manuscript evaluation, the fee for this service will be deducted from your total. Additionally, if you’d like to get a sense of my editing style without committing to a first chapter assessment, I’m happy to share an excerpt from a previous editorial letter (with the author’s permission, of course). For more information, check out the FAQ page.
price
$0.03 USD/£0.02 GBP per word
All prices are set with the EFA’s standard rates. Please review these here.
*I offer up to 40% off all my services for writers in the Global South as defined by UN Trade and Development. This classification includes Africa, Latin America and the Caribbean, Asia (excluding Israel, Japan, and the Republic of Korea), and Oceania (excluding Australia and New Zealand).
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